Saturday, April 9, 2011

George likes porage(a paragraph flash)

 One day a 5 year old boy named George was wondering about. He ran into the kitchen about to brake some vaces like he did everyday. He used to think it was a daily sport that ''cool kids'' did. When he was was so close about to swing his tiny little hand his mother called ''BREAKFEST'' he scuried over to eat some pancakes.

His mother always knew that he would not eat anything that he never put his little slobery tastebuds on before. So she made pourage with an outside layer made out of pancake, also in the form of a pancake! Clever indeed. When he made it to the table he got that slober tongue (what his mother called him) on the (pancake) he said '' MOM THIS IS THE BEST PANCAKE EVER''! Then his mother did that untill he was 20, on George's 21 birthday his mother asked him '' Do you want any porage''? Then he asked '' What's pourage''?

8 comments:

  1. Sam, that is HILARIOUS! Very funny and well-written. You have a natural talent for writing, you really do. I like this line the best: "His mother always knew that he would not eat anything that he never put his little slobbery taste buds on before." heheheheh!!!! Sounds like someone I know!!
    Big hugs and kisses from your pancake-making Mom! ooxoxoxoxox
    (I think I'm going to try the pancake idea on you!!!!)

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  2. "he would not eat anything that he never put his little slobery tastebuds on before"

    That part cracked me up. This was very funny, Sam. You've got your mom's talent. Keep it up.

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  3. A cool five year old with a cool mom inside a very cool story. "Slobery taste buds" is an awesome description.

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  4. YES! Very funny and quite a good story, nice work Sam!

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  5. Awesome, Sam! Keep writing, this is great.

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  6. Sam - You are a very good writer. Keep it up & you can compete with your Mom. Give her a run for her money!!!ive your Mom some

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  7. H aha ha ....I enjoyed your story Sam. I hope you keep wirting them. I love the idea of a paragraph flash. ideal for people like me who don't have much time and would enjoy a little pick me up adventure like Georges story.
    How often do you think you will be writting them. I will check back for more.

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  8. Definitely keep writing, Sam. Like mother, like son, apparently - zany and pleasant all the way through the little story.

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